This was really good. You really know how to draw the reader into your poetry.
A very emotional piece.

I really love where you went with the title. I know this form is a very difficult one, you have done an amazing job. The flow is impeccable and rolls off the tongue flawlesly.
Beautiful wording and imagery.

"Now I'm sitting with tears in these eyes
Tell me, what do I do with my heart?"

^Excellent choice as your repeating lines and also as the ending! Thanks for entering the contest! take care, Debbie