I Don't Want To Hear Anymore

by Jenni Marie   Nov 15, 2007


Tainted words falling from your lips
Realizing once more you've been caught
Anger sweeping quickly through my veins
Nothing compares to pain you've brought

Chance after chance, yet always mess up
It's like you don't know what else to do
Constantly screwing up everything you can
Not caring that every time, it leaves me blue

Wasted so many sorrowful tear filled nights
Waiting anxiously for you to arrive home
Mascara staining my already wet pillow
As I wondered if I'd be better of alone

Probably thought I'd never find the courage
To finally be strong and decide to leave
Well guess what darling, you were wrong
And now I'm finding it easier to breathe

Finally knowing, don't need you in my life
For all you ever caused was untold woe
Know now I'm strong enough to do this alone
And I don't want to hear your lies anymore

**For A Contest**

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  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Good take on the contest title. The rhyming is good and the message strong...one I'm sure many can relate to....sounds like someone I know....lol....

    "Well guess what darling, you were wrong
    And now I'm finding it easier to breathe"

    ^ A good "now take that!" line....love it!

    The poem has a nice rhythm and flow and makes it's point strongly! Nicely written! Take care, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I like the flow and everything is just excellently written in this poem.

    And the latest stanza is my favorite. Brilliant poem. It should be 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Wow, that was really good. A little different than what you normally write, but still exceptional.

    "As I wondered if I'd be better of alone". I think you meant to say "off"

    This poem delivers a very strong message. I loved it.

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