by Liz
With unicorns and roses |
by Elapsed
I agree with Liz, this is a very beautiful poem!! |
by Lithium
That such a meaningful message to pass onto many and put forward in a very creative way. again i see alot of imagination which is great . xox sam |
by Cindy
Debbie |
by Ingrid
Debbie, |
by Barry
Just stunned!! |
by Rachel RTVW
Vivid imagery and a powerful message. Love is all that matters and true beauty is only skin deep. The flow was excellent and the poem was wonderful from beginning to end. |
Oh, how utterly amazing! Such a wonderful lesson for everyone. I love the messages this contains, from not judging people/things from their appearance or first impression, to realizing that everyone and everything has a purpose for its existence. Self-worth is just as important to accept as the worth of others. |
by shobhana kumar
Dear Debbylyn |
by Pete
I think this is not only a really beautiful piece of literature, but you have written it perfectly for your target audience. It's a no nonsense poem that can appeal to everybody at a base level. Just reading it makes you think of childhood as it was and how it should be, really brings the kid in me out. |
by amber
Everything about this was perfect. Nothing less than perfect. The way you have wrote this, the lesson is plain to see and its so well written. You are truely an amazing writer...i look forward to reading more from you :) |
by Lonely Rider
" To measure true love's value |
by MrPurple
Wow, this was an amazing poem... I hope people can learn of this poem. Poems aren't meant to be shallow, and literal.. This is a great example, it leaves you wondering until the very end where it captures you. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Oh wow, Deb!!! The title caught my eye and boy am I glad. |
Wow it has such a great meaning! Some people don't realize the true meaning of beauty and thats what you display here in a pleasant way....10/10 *clap%clap* |