Comments : The Writer

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Just love this one....like I said before the pieces about the art of poetry writing speak to me....you've captured it so beautifully in this amazing poem....

    "Pieces of my soul,
    Scattered on this sheet,
    Moments where I faltered,
    I felt incomplete.

    Sometimes I wrote in happiness,
    But pain, it flowed with ease,
    No depths I could not reach,
    When writing on my knees."

    ^so beautifully written....describes how the poet uses the depths of despair to pour forth on the page a beautiful creation....

    This poem has everything to make it an outstanding read by any standards.. perfect rhyming, flow, message....just beautiful!

    Take care, Debbie