by Crystal Gaze Nov 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Bitter Like The Rain 2007-11-09 |
by Kaila
This one was better because it was shorter and less noticeable. Nice work |
Great emotion and feeling great metaphors (almost to good for random inspiration) lol you did great keep up the good work |
That a really sad poem....hope that feeling has surpass and i hope you get back at least a piece of your heart. |
Interesting poem. I hope you don't feel this way anymore. |
by KJ
Very good poem. I totally loved everything about it. You showed good emotion in this one. Very very sad though. ={ I liked how you started it off and then the "You're Dumped" line was like the "rock" of the poem I should say...Great job. |