Wow, this was really sad. Sometimes I feel like that will happen to me and my fiance. I really loved this. 5/5

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I agree that was really sad. but i liked it anyway 4/5

The connentation rly helps with the mood, good job. i think it was a little abrupt when you said your dumped, but it helped understand the meaning.

Wow.I never expected that.The truth is I was thinking ohh its another potential breakup but "your dumped" was so unexpected.
Anyway it's really good,but some parts just swiched topics really quickly.Like going from the rain falling and your heart to his words.But that might just be me reading quickly.
Keep writing these great poems :),
Rado

It's amazing how long relationships take to build with love and trust and how fast a few small words can take it all away. Amazing job once again, excellent imagery and word choice throughout 5/5 GG23

This poem was beautiful, Elaine! I could just picture every single line you wrote.. the rain, all the tears of a broken-hearted girl, her head throbbing from pain, it was all perfectly clear. I loved it! You have such a way with words. The poem was so sad but still deserves a 5/5!!!!!! <3 <3

~Kayla~

I love this poem alot.
you did a great job.
very emotional and well spoken.
i think poems should be random.
and out of place sometimes. :]
you did a great job.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Very good poem. I totally loved everything about it. You showed good emotion in this one. Very very sad though. ={ I liked how you started it off and then the "You're Dumped" line was like the "rock" of the poem I should say...Great job.
Perfect 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Interesting poem. I hope you don't feel this way anymore.

That a really sad poem....hope that feeling has surpass and i hope you get back at least a piece of your heart.

Great emotion and feeling great metaphors (almost to good for random inspiration) lol you did great keep up the good work

This one was better because it was shorter and less noticeable. Nice work