by Crystal Gaze Nov 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A dull ache settled in the pit of my stomach as my tears became painful to hold in. |
Dam dude, this poem is so bad ass. i love it. i wish i could write this good 5/5 |
by KJ
Another wonderful piece! Perfectly written if I must say so myself =} |
5/5 i tried to comment ur second to last wouldnt let me so here |
by Kayla
Omg, Elaine!! I cannot believe you made a poem this sad >.< It honestly brought me to tears. The way you decribed this boy.. I was putting every detail I knew of Tyler in my head whenever I read this and just imagined this being about me and him. I couldn't tear my eyes from your words. They were so powerful and wow.. I loved it! You have such a way with words Elaine.. *Sniffles* I love you! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 |
I really love the style of yours. This is very well written poem with a good imagery and the story was so powerful. You deserve 5/5!!! |