Amazing as usual.
Sometimes the flow went a little off,but the emotion brought the poem back up to a 5/5.You can really tell you love the person your talking about. :D Hope to read more soon,
Rado

Wow, so wonderfully written!
its so sad, i found myself wrapped up in the poem, the moment i started reading.
the description is breathtaking!
You truley are something of a stunning writer.
Never stop.

Kat xxx

We'll always have that feeling where no matter how much we give in a relationship or how perfect we are for one another, something will always come between the love we share. Excellent poem your words were spoken with such truth 5/5 GG23

I really love the style of yours. This is very well written poem with a good imagery and the story was so powerful. You deserve 5/5!!!

Omg, Elaine!! I cannot believe you made a poem this sad >.< It honestly brought me to tears. The way you decribed this boy.. I was putting every detail I knew of Tyler in my head whenever I read this and just imagined this being about me and him. I couldn't tear my eyes from your words. They were so powerful and wow.. I loved it! You have such a way with words Elaine.. *Sniffles* I love you! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

5/5 i tried to comment ur second to last wouldnt let me so here

Another wonderful piece! Perfectly written if I must say so myself =}
My favorite part in this one was:

"He lay beside me- My Beloved- with a small gap separating us. I plead silently for him to
demolish the space, needed him to take me in his arms and hold me till this storm
passed... But he made no move, he didn't even twitch, he lay perfectly still."

Idk why exactly, but it stuck out to me. Beautiful poem I think
5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Dam dude, this poem is so bad ass. i love it. i wish i could write this good 5/5