Savannah

by omgitsmina   Nov 15, 2007


One day I met
Someone new
Who made me happy
With a smile so true

When you came
Into my life
I welcomed you
There was no strife

We had so much fun
You were a great friend
It was just too perfect
It had to end

And I was pained
When you left
And so angered
At this theft

My mind is numb
And my heart, it aches
This distance between us
Is the biggest mistake

I love you so much
And I just want you to know
That I'll never forget
How our friendship did grow

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  • 15 years ago

    by SiLeNt

    Reply to all the messages i sent okay! hehe love you 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Taylor

    I really liked this poem:)
    Keep up the great work.
    It had a really strong ending... You know what I mean? When you read something... and you really like it and the ending sucks... you get disappointed...
    & I was definitely not disappoined:)
    haha, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxMzPuRpLe BaBiiExXx

    It was ok!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Once again, very gud poem! i loved it, this actually happened to me a month ago, my friend moved to canada.. i was rele sad.. so i can rele relate! 5/5 keep up the great job!

    - Tabi!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    This was a VERY beautiful poem, Mina! You didn't even have to use many words to describe the pain you felt over losing your friend.. I can relate to it in so many ways! Great job, keep it up!! <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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