This is a beautiful poem. good job.

I'm going to be honest.
It didn't seem like a poem, more of a story put in poem form.

Which isn't a bad thing, but I'm not too fond of those types of poems.
Many, many others are though.
You did do a great job, don't get me wrong. . but, it's just not my type of poem.

Now, since I think that it's deserves, 100%, 5.5 . .. That's what I'm giving. I won't have my likes and dislikes making your scores lower.
It does deserve that. (:

Hi my friend,
first of all sorry as i was away from the site for a long time. i was going through a lot in my life and finaly things are getting better.

as always this was an amazing poem by a great poet, i really enjoyed it as it was truly great.
keep up the great job like always, you are amazing.