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by Chris Nov 16, 2007 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
You think there's no one Behind these green eyes But behind them Resides a very real person He feels as you do Pain, joy, heat, cold He feels as you do Despite your claims otherwise He sees as you do Black, white, colors, emotions He sees as you do Despite your claims otherwise He loves as you do Hugs, kisses, notes, attention He loves as you do Despite your claims otherwise Everyone says that Behind these green eyes There is no soul But the truth is he's just frozen
by BreakMyWingsAndRun
I like the ending! good job! 4/5 it would be better if it rhymed but oh well good job!