That was sooooo horribly sad! Wow! I felt like crying! That was a HUGE ending and it just tugs at your heart and makes you wanna scream! This piece really goes to show that we need to say what we feel before it's long gone and we can't get it back. Great job!
*ME*

Way to send yourself over the edge..never saying how you feel inside. Even if it doesnt turn out as planned from there it's easier to pick yourself up. Very intriguing poe, I enjoyed every line. 5/5