Awww what a sweet poem, really flows well and a good selection of words, good job!!! :)
keep it up!
- ali x

It's so cute! it's like wat every girl dreams of. keep up the good work.

xoxo
~waiting~

I think this is good. So keep writing.
+_+

This poem is amzing. i mean it, it sounds like you wrote it with great passion. It show, Keep writing,

Julie

I really like this poem. It's seems to have a lot of feeling in it. Great work, you should definitely consider writing more.

-Ky

Beautifully written!
very sweet!
keep it up!!