How Long

by aDORKable x3   Nov 16, 2007


How long will it take me to forget about you;
To erase all the memories I still hold onto?
To forget about the love that I thought I had -
To live my life happy, not always sad.

How long will I hold onto these empty hopes -
These broken dreams won't let me cope.
You're gone and there's nothing for me to do -
Sometimes I wish I never met you.

Broken hearts and dreams are so over rated -
It's killing me slowly and I absolutely hate it.
Why can't I be just like everyone else,
Who keeps their hearts high above on some shelf?

How long will I hold onto these stupid feelings?
How long will it feel like I'm constantly dreaming?
How long will it take me to forget about you?
To erase all the memories I still hold onto?

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  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nice rhyming and flow to this very sad and questioning piece......

    "Broken hearts and dreams are so over rated -
    It's killing me slowly and I absolutely hate it."

    ^ I like this couplet....
    the whole poem is filled with emotion that I'm sure we all can relate to.....thanks for entering the contest1 Great job! Take care, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Such an easy piece to relate to. sometimes your flow is just a little bit off in spots, but your rhyme is always good and your message, so touching. I enjoy your work immensely!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    Excellent job i feel the exact same way at the moment. 5/5