Man i so feel your pain and i know it does not feel good(ice cream makes me feel better,lots and lots of it)

I relate.
It would be better if it rhymed.

Aww im sorry but i kno wat ur goin thro!!! u should check sum of mine out and u can c i took my anger out on sum.....well check em out and comment plz let me kno wat u think!!!!!!!!!Good job.......................

Thx so much for ur comment it makes me feel liike sum1 cares enough about me!

This poem is full of deep emotion. i think its one of ur best. i can relate to this. n sumtimes all u need to do is write out how u feel.. i have one of those n ppl down voted it cause it didnt go right.. but this is a 5. i love it

This poem is full of emotion and feeling. The word choice could be slightly better but other than that i see nothing wrong with it. You really seemed to put your heart and soul into this piece even though they were hurting and for that i am impressed. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander