by Alexis Nov 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I still miss you... But not like I did before. The intense aching I felt, Isn't there anymore. I still whisper your name... Not as often as I used to. Now it may be once, Before the day is through. I still hear your voice... Replaying, in my mind. But it's fading now, Soon, silence I will find. I still long for you... To feel your touch. But, it's not like before, I don't dream it as much. I still think about you... And wonder how you are. But my feelings have changed, And they don't go as far. I still feel you sometimes... Maybe you're thinking of me? Or maybe it's just a little memory, Of how it used to be. I still love you... But it's just not as strong. Because I'm letting go now, So we can both move on. I still hear ME say... No one will love YOU like I do. That's so hard to believe now, After the pain you put me through. You still have a piece of my heart... Because I always felt you here. Now, I'm hoping and praying, That, that too, will quickly disappear. This will be my last goodbye... I've nothing else to say. Everything I felt for you, Can now just fade away |
by MyEscape
Awwww....that was so good. I would break it up into stanzas, but other than that, the flow and rhyme was extremely good and the poem itself was touching and easy to relate to. I really liked it, and there were so many lines I enjoyed I can't put them all here. |
by Shelby
This is so good lol its exactly how i feel about my ex EXACTLY ur really good at this |