Eclipse

by skynerraw   Nov 16, 2007


The path ahead is black
But I cannot go back
The last ties are now undone
The moon will now eclipse the sun
A shadow will fall across this land
Hell will show it's evil hand
Clasp me in its evil hold
I'm slowly fading into his mold
Of suicide, death and blood
My footsteps are covered, coated with mud
The path is hidden, I walk into death
This evil path of blood and meth
I walk this hell, I want to die
I bleed oil, I cannot cry
I walk this hell and find my end
I walk alone, without a friend
The sun is now, dark with pain
The path is coated with acid rain
I find my mark, my death bed
My evil heart, that wants me dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marci

    Amazing, and thats just about all I can really say about it. Its so full of emotion, though I'm sure all your poems are. Its great, well written..and just pulled me into it! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I liked this poem alot. the words and flow was amazing. my fav lines were

    I walk this hell and find my end
    I walk alone, without a friend

    i can relly relate to thi. very good poem. loved it