"i would love to tell you"-I LOVE YOU this poem is perfect but you got some spellings mistakes. lol otherwise it is. i love it. excellent written and beautifully expressed.

Hahaha wow u cant make a couple of spelling mistakes with out having someone jump all over you geez hehehe jk ttyl love you bye

Hahaha wow u cant make a couple of spelling mistakes with out having someone jump all over you geez hehehe jk ttyl love you bye

Hahaha wow u cant make a couple of spelling mistakes with out having someone jump all over you geez hehehe jk ttyl love you bye

Great piece right there... strong emotions... Loved it.... 5/5

Dang alliey good work one of your best poems so far

So deep, So passionate...I would love to tell you. 5/5

Damn i aint gone lye that ho go hard DOWN SOUF WE DONT BAR THAT BULLSH** WE KILL OURSELF BEFORE KILLIN YOU PUNK BIT**ES WHO FAKN THE FUNK...NORTHSIDE HOUSTON TX TAKIN OVER THE WORLD.

Wow.....this poem if filled with passion and flawless...spelling doesn't matter. only you and what you think..
9/5

Aw!...tear this was like sad!! pooh...
greeat job..5/5
***aLy***

Wow........ its so flawless.... beautiful!