My love

by Abu3li   Nov 16, 2007


I wrote this poem for a change and fun

hope you like it people

My love for you is so conspicuous
My love for you is a fait accompli
My intentions ain't sleazy or promiscuous
My love for you is more than it should be

Maybe my language is so flowery
But it's true, not obsequious
Your love is the energy that empowers me
And sorry if my words are ambiguous

I tried to write something queer
Cause you are pulchritudinous
But every word is so sincere
like my love for you, it was adventurous

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Dnt know wut to say man
    that really great
    keep on writing ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystallovesmatt

    Love your way with words so amazing!! pls keep writing more!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    Ilovethispoem!
    Very cute i like your way with words!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Its not one of your best poems.....3/5 but it was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Hmm.. yeah you got me there because you have those deep and unsual words but then the problem there is you keep on repeating some words i mean in the first stanza you've written the words "my love for you.." a couple of times and so as the word "..love.." i suggest to enhance your imagination and ideas to make it more interesting. though it is somehow interesting

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