by Abu3li Nov 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I wrote this poem for a change and fun |
by Meme
Dnt know wut to say man |
Love your way with words so amazing!! pls keep writing more!! |
Ilovethispoem! |
by Christina
Its not one of your best poems.....3/5 but it was good. |
by ECILA ice
Hmm.. yeah you got me there because you have those deep and unsual words but then the problem there is you keep on repeating some words i mean in the first stanza you've written the words "my love for you.." a couple of times and so as the word "..love.." i suggest to enhance your imagination and ideas to make it more interesting. though it is somehow interesting |