Comments : My love

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    : ) cute hunn i loved it <33

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    It was AWSOME woah! i been saying that alot but i mean it! ur really good! this was REALLY good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    A lovely piece of love..
    and very sweet words of love then...

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Hmm.. yeah you got me there because you have those deep and unsual words but then the problem there is you keep on repeating some words i mean in the first stanza you've written the words "my love for you.." a couple of times and so as the word "..love.." i suggest to enhance your imagination and ideas to make it more interesting. though it is somehow interesting

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Its not one of your best poems.....3/5 but it was good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    Ilovethispoem!
    Very cute i like your way with words!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystallovesmatt

    Love your way with words so amazing!! pls keep writing more!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Dnt know wut to say man
    that really great
    keep on writing ;)