This is endlessly touching, filled with greatly expressed sadness. Some lines brought the tears to my eyes. Amazing poem, with a lot of emotions and very vivid imagery that created complete atmosphere.
5/5 from me

'he hears a voice say no more pain
as God takes his hand and starts to explain
you are an angel in heaven with me
I couldn't bare to watch now your soul is free. '

Such a heartbreaking poem.
So sad and it seems awful but by the end of the poem i am relieved by the way it finished. Its awful to think that i feel relief that he died but anything for his torment to be over. I felt a lump in my throat as i read it. Once again a truely amazing poem. Take care.

Kelly
xx

Such a sad heart wrenching poem, very well written 5/5

Youre poetry amazes me, i can relate to so much of it, ur my fav. author,luv this poem,5/5

This poem REALLY touched my heart and soul! lol. It was just heartwrending.. Very well written.