Cry

by Ashley   Nov 16, 2007


Empty and cold
I hang up the phone
I let you believe
That I could easily relieve
This hurt.
That I'd be fine
I'd never let you know
That this pain is so immense
This feeling's so intense
I really wanted to cry
But I refused to let you hear
The tears falling from my eyes
So I waited paitently with a heavy heart
Until you finished telling me why we'd be apart
I tried to distract myself from those horrible words
And keep you on the phone
Rambling about irrelevant things
Finally the call is ended by you with a forceful goodbye
And as the night is spent
I sit in my room
And CRY.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I dig this one as well, I have this thing about crying in front of anybody. I would feel weak and vulnerable. Stay strong girl.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The structure here disturbed the flow. The rhymes here were at lack, although that the meaning is strong. The poem is well written and the subject is one many can relate to. Nice job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Damaris

    OMG! That was fabulous! The words went so well with one another. Way to Go!!