by Ashley Nov 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Empty and cold |
by Hidden1
I dig this one as well, I have this thing about crying in front of anybody. I would feel weak and vulnerable. Stay strong girl. |
by Shinobi
The structure here disturbed the flow. The rhymes here were at lack, although that the meaning is strong. The poem is well written and the subject is one many can relate to. Nice job 4/5 |
by Damaris
OMG! That was fabulous! The words went so well with one another. Way to Go!! |