by Dino Dhamphyr Nov 16, 2007
category :
Special events /
christmas
Under the mistle toe |
Wow...wow...wow...super ahmazing poem i love it!5/5 |
by Daisy Wells
Brilliant poem made me smile keep up the good work! x |
I rather enjoyed this poem a lot, and holiday poems are never my favorite. You used beautiful words and of course the message was lovely (it made me want a lover to have under the mistletoe this year!). The only advice I would offer is that in the beginning the word "ring" and "sing" repeated twice is a little much, but other than that great job! |