Rock Gig

by Laurenf7   Nov 16, 2007


Lights go down
The crowd roar
Shiver down you spine
Wanting to hear more.

Drinks being spilled
Sweat on our face
The ringing in our ears
And echo of the bass.

In the mosh pit
I comfortably stand
Pushing, Screaming, Shoving
To see my favorite band

With his guitar
He ran past us all
"We love you. We love you"
He heard all the girls call

People swaying in time
Like a shield around me
Putting their lighters up
Worshiping over "thee"

Best place in the world
For a concert to be
(insert your country), my home
Forget, your troubles and feel free.

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  • 17 years ago

    by justeene

    Hey this is really good and flows great good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by damont

    I like this part very creative. in my opinion

    Best place in the world
    For a concert to be
    (insert your country), my home
    Forget, your troubles and feel free

    excellent poem. keep writing