She's A Bleeder

by xXMohawkedMahemXx   Nov 16, 2007


A blade to the skin
A knife to the heart
A feeling of release
From the very start

Each cut releases something
But she doesn't seem to know
Why its the blade she picks up
When she's feeling so low

As shes pushes down on the blade
Theres a sudden rush of pain
As the blood trickles out
Her thoughts they melt away

The first cut releases nothing
So she pushes once more on the blade
Cutting that little deeper
The blade rests upon a vein

Her heart beats a little faster
Her pupils begin to dilate
She believes she's Okay
But really shes a state

That very same day
She again picks up the Blade
Places it to her skin
And begins slicing away

Now shes bleeding out
From a cut gone terribly wrong
She panics and yells out
But everyone has gone

Shes now bled for far too long
Her body begins to get weaker
Now she feel's the darkness
Her hand held by the Grim Reaper

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Wonderful, sad, and scary all come to mind while reading this, i liked it alot it made me think alot... i really hope nothing like this ever happenes to you, i don't know if you cut but be carful if you do... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by A Loser

    I totally know how you feel. this was really good, and really touching. you're an awesome writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cobra

    Very deep poem. Please take my advice, if you are afraid that you are going to make a mishap, make sure someone is the to help stop the breeding. If you are serious to do it, try something less painful. I've been there a couple of times and it is not nice to try and learn from your mistakes. I failed 3 times because I was stupid.