Wow...it almost seem that i was there. i like how u word it:)

I rele like it and i liike the flow of it.....5/5

Wow that last stanza was so beautiful. I love the emotions and imagery you expressed all throughout the poem. It flowed beautifully and all in all it was great. *5/5*

Im waiting for the same thing, so once again i can relate to the poem. i loved the flow that it had, it was great. i really liked it, your expression was great. wonderful job
5*5
Kimberly

Awwz verty cute...i think ive read this one b4 lol!! but i rele like it...its short but says alot!!! 5/5

I love this poem i love.love poems and this one is going into my faves!!!...)

Wow this is a well written passionate love poem

Aw, this is another wonderful poem. It's so cute. I loved the last stanza. You did a great job with this one. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

I loved this, once again emotion and flow was great. And, I think it's easy to relate to for a lot of peole because it could either mean .. long distance relationships or just the pure yearning for love.

Which is great. xD

Wonderful job, darling.
5.5

Simply beautiful.my favorite part was these two little lines
As we stand there in the sunlight That's shining down on you and me

I imagined this so clearly.your unable to see the face all you can see is blackness because the light is downon them so brightly.Two tress and two people holding hands about to kiss.Seems perfect...