by oXoIESWYDEOPINoXo Nov 16, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Harmless little babies from the mothers love, |
by Erica
Loved the message u sent in this. really touching. 5/5 loved it |
by ALEX
Um.. I like the concept, but you need to work on your rhyming, and your rhythm. Some parts are brilliant, but then there's a little quirk in there that just throws the reader off. Keep working at it, because you obviously have something to offer the world. =] |
by Live WeLL
Wow.. this poem is really touching! Each and every stanza had such a powerful meaning. I don't understand why more people haven't read it and commented it. It is a great poem and the ending is amazing! Excellent job! Keep it up =) |