A good poem though , May u get alot of friends :) ,what would happen if ur friends get the same thinking like u ? ... u r the true friend ! May Allah give u a long life , n may such moments never come in ur life which try to compell u to end ur life ! Ameen

Wow, Just beautiful.. I am now reading all your stuff since you left me the comment! Your just amazing, Im inspired

Aww this is really cute too, love it!

True Friend.
True Lover.

All of your words describe the purest form of emotion anyone can EVER have for someone.
Keep writing! I love them!
5/5

~Ally

I liked this one a lot... I found the strong use of I very interesting. I also very much liked the simplicity... Simplicity is scary and dangerous because it is so honest and I commend you for it! Thanks also for your comment on my poem "To Autumn".

My feelings during this were undescribable...this was absolutely amazzingg..i love it. <3

WoaH! this is so fantastic. . i just don't know why. . really great. . . emotions are well expressed. . . nice!

This is a really good poem i can relate to this aot keep up the work you have great talent
5/5 kasia

Wow tyou must really love whom ever you wrote this for!

Wow this is soooo awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! iv never read a poem like this before its pretty beautiful.. id do that for anybody stranger or family : )
100/100 keep up the great writting u have!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing job!!!!

I would take my life if it meant you keeping yours.
Jump in front of a car and it's hard metal doors.

Hi Joshua,

this stanza stands out for me because it's funny. This poem is very sweet and endearing and it was a joy to read!
Keep up the great work.

Take care,

Ingrid

Wow Joshua...that's just beautiful. I just started reading your poetry and it goes straight to the heart. It's simple yet mens everything. I would give it 10 even though it's not on the scale. :)

This is really beautiful

I loved the energy and deep emotion in this poem. I do hope that your love never has to be proven or pushed to that limit. Must be nice having love that intense for someone:)

I actually loved this.
I'd love for someone to value me this highly =/