As the fire rages in,
The screams are just starting to begin.
I call out but no one hears me,
This isn't how I should leave.
Calling from my deepest morning,
Falling from the 18th story.
I hit the bottom but didn't get up,
I've hit the bottom...
And I'm.. Broken!
From everything and anything you said,
To me, to be, who you wanted!
I never have and never will!
Be who you were....
Alcohol and pills...
I start to breath in the smoke,
Ignoring, but it just makes me choke.
Every word you ever said,
Revealing the truth inside my head.
Screaming out to all who'd hear,
Falling from all of this fear.
I hit the bottom but didn't get up,
I've hit the bottom...
And I'm.. Broken!
From everything and anything you said,
To me, to be, who you wanted!
I never have and never will!
Be who you were....
Alcohol and pills...
You wasted,
All of our time...
We wasted,
All of our lives...
Believing, in nothing but raging friction,
Scorned from this addiction...
Broken!
From everything and anything you said,
To me, to be, who you wanted!
I never have and never will!
Be who you were....
From everything and anything you said,
To me, to be, who you wanted!
I never have and never will!
Be who you were....
Alcohol and pills...
-Lizzi-
(A short song I wrote. Hope you like it. Wish I could sing it for you! :[)
This is a well written poem with a powerful message
I would have extended the first and shortened the second
As the fire rages in,
The screams are just starting to begin
As the fire rages within
screams are about to begin
but the meter need not always be perfect
well done
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