I like this poem it is long. though but since i don't mind reading its cool. i like the title very creative. it seems though you going through alot like some truth just hit you out of no where. i can feel your pain and see your position when read your poem nice work.

Farah.....
this was......
a great poem, but so sad.
idk wat alls going on right now and im not asking u to tell me but if u ever just need to tlk to sum1 just call, or message me, or w/e. I hope your ok.

love,
Nicole

Oh, wow, this is so intense. The emotions flow through every line which is so powerful and left quite an impression on me. Great poem, from the beginning to the end, with raw feelings that completely capture the reader.
You did fantastic job on this piece. I can deeply relate to some parts of this poem.
Keep up!

This was absolutely gorgeous

Wow, this was intense. At first honostly, I thought I would get bored. Lol. But I didn't with every line the poem got more and moe intense. Other than a few grammar errors and words that could of sounded better. It was a beautiful write.

My favorite stanza>>

A year ago, I buried them in more handshakes and lies,
And dug them up again just now.
[Darling, I'm used to you saying goodbye.]

I use the brackets in my work too and I think they REALLY added extra emotion on this line. A great attribute to your work. I loved the whole peice. Great job. 5.5

Amber :]]

Wow. I am in pure shock. That was just amazing. Everything you wrote just sounds... so natural. Lol. Everything flows together perfectly. Beautifully done, m'dear. :]] Overall: 5.5
By the way, I'm adding you to my favorites as well. :]]

-- Steph.

I enjoyed reading this a lot..

its sad but I really felt like I got to know you (or whos its about) and yea.. i like it