Giving it My All

by Sinful Want   Nov 17, 2007


Give, give, and give some more
thats all you ever asked from me
Giving, giving, and giving some more
thats all I ever did, and asked for nothing in return

You took everything I had to offer
you never gave anything back
You sucked out my tortured soul
drained the sad life I held so close to my heart

Destroying my beliefs in a better life
treating me like nothing
Destroying all thoughts about my life
you kept putting me down

I gave you the life I once had
you took it and threw it away
I gave you my life
and you never gave it back

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Very repetitive..... doesn't sound good... this theme is good but you haven't done any justice to it!

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Great poem ... no comment ! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    This was interesting and very good i think..awesome poem..5!

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    VERY DEEP
    love it <3

  • 16 years ago

    by ~*love me not*~

    Wow.
    thats very deep.
    i really can relate.
    (: