Little angels talk alot

by Finalgravedigger   Nov 17, 2007


In the heaves
little angels talk alot
drawing their weapons
but have never even fought.

They stay among the clouds
in peace and wonder
while hell is on earth
with infinite blunders.

Always speeching of bringing peace to earth
being true angels
they leave us wingless one the dirt.

The devils strangle
poor innocent souls
as angels talk
the earth is left in a hole.

Slowly pulled away from salvation
these little angles speak
never truly lifting a finger
leaving us very weak.

Even though angels wont come
its up to us to fight
if they wont bring the light
it is us who must make it right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The theme of this poem could be the power of the free will . Free will creates the conflict of acceptance or rejection of subjective power I like your style

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    I really liked how original the poem was. most people copy what they hear, just in different words. congratulations :)

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Its very well written I've only just started writing so I can't say much about that. But Its a very beutiful poem and Its so true we really do have to do the fighting.
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Great poem, dude. thanks for the comment, keep up the good work, it was a little hard to grasp the meaning, but nice, inspirational tone.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    I usually don't like poems about life but this was awesome! Beautiful work! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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