Beutifully written and i love it, best i have read from you so far
Hannah x x x

I really like this poem, it is so interesting and unique. You wrote it greatly, second and fifth stanzas are my favorite ones. In whole piece you created powerful and truly captivating tone. This is one of my favorite poems of yours, it is somehow superb. Well done!

I really enjoyed this poem. Very uniquely written, I can't say I have an exact favorite part of it; i liked it all.

Keep it up!!

5/5

Cuute i like it
5/5

I really liked it thanks so much for commenting me on mine i will check back and read some more~
~Meg~

Truly when you think about it, man got himself into this mess and now we must make the best of it for now. I mean we made our bed and ironically we now must lay in it. This was a very interesting piece...unlike any I've read on this site which is rare. Keep up your good work and interesting view point.
~Midnight Sun

OMG, that is so beautifull..
5/5

It was a really good poem different veiw than many ppl and i liked that!

I loved it i would have commented early but...my internet broke down =_= Sorry. I always love your poems, very original and nicely written

~Midnight song~ xoxo

Hey great poem. you do write beautifully.

thanks for commentin on my poem!

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I usually don't like poems about life but this was awesome! Beautiful work! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Great poem, dude. thanks for the comment, keep up the good work, it was a little hard to grasp the meaning, but nice, inspirational tone.

Its very well written I've only just started writing so I can't say much about that. But Its a very beutiful poem and Its so true we really do have to do the fighting.
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I really liked how original the poem was. most people copy what they hear, just in different words. congratulations :)

The theme of this poem could be the power of the free will . Free will creates the conflict of acceptance or rejection of subjective power I like your style