Hey Jenn,
I'm sorry I didn't read this sooner because it's lovely. I dont often go in for reading poems that don't rhyme but this kept me. I like because all you have done is write about the feeling one has for another when they are deeply in love which is what you surely were when you wrote this. Simple concept but beautifully written, well done, K

thank you kevin, ill read some of yours

I really love your poem.. it's great! please check out my poem "Dry Your Eyes" it would mean a lot to me..
Keep up the good work =)
The rate: 5/5
Hugs

Jenn...this was absolutely beautiful...I LOVED THIS POEM!!!I can't even put into words how to tell ya how much i liked it...it was awesome honey keep up the good work!!!!!!

Great poem. A lot of feeling. Thank you so much for the comments, they meant a lot.

And to answer your question, I didn't stop cutting.. not yet anyway. I had stopped for a week but then... well, I slipped I guess. But I am still trying to stop. It has been 4 days and i hope it last forever.
Thanks for caring hun! <3

Love,
Tiff

Okay, it didn't flow as well as it could have, but it was well written, keep writing.

I loved it.. it was really sweet.. great write...

Nice job hun i know this kind love very nice have you thought about making anny new poems ?? 5.5

I thought it was really good, but some grammar mistakes but that really doesn't matter, still good poem 5/5

Very nice job.

I well actully love this poem it deals with what im going through kinda and for the comment me baqck can you do on your favoritee one please? cuz i have one that got commented loke 4 times so bye keep writing like this!!!!!!!

Hey!...great poem!....i loved it!...beautifully penned!..i can soo relate!
Good job!Kp it up!
Tk care!
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