Nice..... very emotional poem I can understand most of the emotions. I love this last bit

why am i still alive

Nadia

5/5

This is a really great poem. You just need to work on rhyming and punctuation. I would give it a 3/5 but I won't vote until you edit it and make it better.

It makes sense, and i like it and i can relate to it. 4/5

WOW THAT KINDA OF SOUNDS LIKE MY LIFE... THIS POEM IS SO GOOD

"to me my life is meaningless
damn my world is a mess
I'm tired of having to impress"
kind of breaks your 2-word rhyming streak but it fits and makes sense. I like it a alot better now that you edited it. 5/5 ^_^

Cool.