Beautiful

Excellent job, this poem had a very good flow!
Keep writting
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Oooooo shivers down spine! Super-creepy but totally awesome! The pace was great and really well sustained. The flow was spot on and the rhyme was perfecto. Imagery was hauntingly effective! My favourite stanza was:

"He whispers now,
You are his slave,
You tilt your chin,
For what he craves."

5/5

Em xXx