"Your presence,
Is like a soft, summer breeze,
Blowing gently into me,
Making it hard to regain myself"
^I love your word choice here, this stanza is beautifully written, nice work.......
"Your voice,
Is like the tapping of the rain,
I embrace the sound,
As it hits my window lightly"
^My favorite stanza, its so unique and sweet.
So good work, I don't know why I haven't read this one yet. Very powerful and deep poem, everything is so perfectly worded. Keep writing, always and forever......