by ABake Nov 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
With a smile on your face, your watched me with him; |
by Blissful
I loved this story! I was truly captivated and curious as to how it would end. The buildup to the ending was flawless but I think everything happened to past in the end. Just my opinion. The meaning in the ending was beautiful and the poem as a whole amazing. Well done *5/5* |
Oh my gosh. You never cease to amaze me :D |
by Teria
The last line was so much shorter than the rest. |