The last line was so much shorter than the rest.

Try; "It does not matter as long as you agree to stay with me. . . "

Or something like that to make it longer.

You did a wonderful job with the poem. So many people don't try to keep it neat. But, you certainly did with this one. And, I'm glad.

It looks great.
AND SOUNDS GREAT.
Lol.

It is great.
5.5

Oh my gosh. You never cease to amaze me :D
I can relate so much to this right now and the minute I started reading it, I knew I would love it.
You're an amazing writer.
Great job!

ShelbyShortcake.

I loved this story! I was truly captivated and curious as to how it would end. The buildup to the ending was flawless but I think everything happened to past in the end. Just my opinion. The meaning in the ending was beautiful and the poem as a whole amazing. Well done *5/5*