Shadows

by sara   Nov 18, 2007


How dare you say you need me,
When you look and turn away,
When the dark of never ending night,
Is leaking into day.

When shadows find they're only lonely,
Walking in the sun,
The choices that we didn't make,
Determine if we've won.

When days drag into lifetimes,
And lifetimes turn to sand,
We hate to be reminded,
We without a maker stand.

I dare to say I never was,
And never will to come,
Walking tall,
We rise and fall,
And dreams are lost for some.

But soon we see,
That though we plea,
We come and we are through,
Grand illusions, deep contusions,
...We'd hate them if we knew.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark3stway

    It flows smoothly
    i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Very very nice.....

    I dare to say I never was,
    And never will to come,
    Walking tall,
    We rise and fall,
    And dreams are lost for some.

    I just love this passage.......you hit me very hard with this.....it's very true.....guess thats why.....This is great work.......5/5.thank you..xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The choices that we didn't make,
    Determine if we've won...

    You are a bright young girl, little one!
    Your words ring so true. The poem is beautiful and it has a good flow to it, well done!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    SO brightlY writteN.....

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