SO brightlY writteN.....

The choices that we didn't make,
Determine if we've won...

You are a bright young girl, little one!
Your words ring so true. The poem is beautiful and it has a good flow to it, well done!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Very very nice.....

I dare to say I never was,
And never will to come,
Walking tall,
We rise and fall,
And dreams are lost for some.

I just love this passage.......you hit me very hard with this.....it's very true.....guess thats why.....This is great work.......5/5.thank you..xoxo

It flows smoothly
i like it