If wishes could come true

by Ingrid   Nov 18, 2007


Words of love so softly spoken
Loving hands caressing golden hair
Fruits of love so eagerly devoured,
the bittersweet taste of the bond we share

Gazing into the depth of your eyes
In awe of the beauty and sheer
captivating serenity of the face
of this man I hold so dear

Meetings after midnight
Hearts that skip a beat
when face to face and skin to skin
Enchanted by love's fire when we meet

Hazel colored eyes that haunt
my every dream both day and night
Always in my thoughts, my love
Images of holding you so tight

Pondering on a future shared
If wishes could come true
I would want us to be together
just me, your little girl and you

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  • 15 years ago

    by emad

    I wish that your wish came true
    well done i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Thanx 4the comment ^_^
    "just me, your little girl and you" is what i like most in this poem.. It's very well expressed..
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm, intresting saying in theis poem simple and yet deep in meaning !!!

    i think you expressed well your emotionsa dn your questions , and your hopes,

    i can relate to some , of the events you spoken off

    i think it is a very good poem to share

    great one

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    A lovely sweet poem of longing, and mildly sensual as well. well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Hazel colored eyes that haunt
    my every dream both day and night
    ^^ i really loved how you worded that specifically it is very refreshing to read poetry with symbolism, imagery, personification and other literary elements in it used so fragily and perfectly

    very very good job : ) 5.5

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