Very sad. but good writing. you really express yourself good.. 5/5

Your feelings are truly expressed in this write, Thank you for sharing it with us. May peace and joy fill your heart once again soon.

sadaddy

Wow, that gives you shivers that does. thats so sad to think that happens int he world. its good because the flow you have gave your poem is fast just like the whole event seemed to happen, the guilt stands out very much so in this poem which adds to the pain and emotions and makes it a very strong read.

this is very good. well done xxx