by June
I loved this one ,kind of mirrors a love I feel I have lost.Great write ,well done! |
Awe. sad, but sweet. |
This is friggen awesome!...I love it. <3...pretty much amaazzinngg..=] |
by Nix
I like the title, anyway I am not a big fan of typical love poetry, this could be better with some powerful metaphors also I think that this piece lack originality. |
by Lizaveta
In some poems there's a thing that cathces your attention and makes the whole poem look more |
by Blissful
Oh I just loved the title and the poem blew me away! I could feel the desire and love in this poem because it was real easy for me to relate ... yearning for a lost love. Well done *5/5* |
I loved your word choice for this poem. The flow was decent. And the concept was really good. Overall I give this a 5/5 :P Good job |
by Marc Ortiz
Well this is something different from the other two poems I have read. |
by Jenni
I think that this may have been my favoirte poem of yours. The title itself drew me in, and the poem was good throughout. there were no flow issues and it just seemed to go together so well! 5/5 |
by Dreamofolwin
A beautiful poem about love, touching and written from the heart. Well done :) |