I like it! The topic was great, and overall it was really good, I just had some small prob.s with it...vvv
"And they'll never die"

I think, I would sound better as "And they will never die"

And the last part, I think would be better if you kept the same rhyme scheme, like Rhyme,
none,
rhyme
none

But other than that, I really liked it!

Good poem

Good poem

Aww, deep and very well-written. Although I have to disagree... Some memories will never fade away. It just depends on how close the memory is to your heart :)

5/5!

Your poems always make me think
of stuff like this one i thought its funny how addicts hold onto bad memories like thier
something special man let that s**t go