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by crystaljean88
I never really read a poem on this subject. i did enjoy it though. my fav lines wereA weak fist holds A sharp metal stump But thrust into the gut The man begins to slump u had a great choice of words in this stanza. very great write
by FridusBlueheaven
Really great poem, I love the flow and emotion. 5/5 from me!!!