Comments : Pain in Glory

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I never really read a poem on this subject. i did enjoy it though.
    my fav lines were

    A weak fist holds
    A sharp metal stump
    But thrust into the gut
    The man begins to slump

    u had a great choice of words in this stanza. very great write

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Really great poem, I love the flow and emotion. 5/5 from me!!!