What Really Happened That Night!? <3

Uh oh. Sounds like some grown people stuff happened. Lol. Anywho, a sad poem. While the story behind it was not that detailed I felt your questioning emotion.. Great job :]]

I like the repetition of the questions.
and the aura of your ponders is well portrayed.
i like this. and i liked the ending alot too.
great write. 5/5.

I liked the repitition of the question, it truly added suspense for me and made the poem more interesting. I do think it was a lil too simple for my taste. *4/5* from me

It was okay...
the flow was a little off
and the repition got in the way a bit
4/5

Awwz thx!