Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

Thx.....im glad u love my poems!!....

This was very good. I love the assertiveness in it. The questions you ask with such a fast paced desperation to understand what happened. It's actually a nice change from a lot of poems. It's unique in the sense that you ask genuine questions, and don't try to answer them, or try to guess.
5/5.

Awwz thx!

It was okay...
the flow was a little off
and the repition got in the way a bit
4/5

I liked the repitition of the question, it truly added suspense for me and made the poem more interesting. I do think it was a lil too simple for my taste. *4/5* from me

I like the repetition of the questions.
and the aura of your ponders is well portrayed.
i like this. and i liked the ending alot too.
great write. 5/5.

Uh oh. Sounds like some grown people stuff happened. Lol. Anywho, a sad poem. While the story behind it was not that detailed I felt your questioning emotion.. Great job :]]