This poem was very well written. i did have a hard time following it thought. i belive u can make the poem a little longer and it would be alot better to read.

A few months ago I would have said that was me. It's amazing how much this poem portrays my thoughts about my cousin. A few months ago she did something and I just can't take it anymore. This poem is outstanding!

I love your word choice and the pattern and flow it all worked really well! great job!

THAT YAYA IS FREACKIN FUNNY

THAT YAYA IS FREACKIN FUNNY

Aww this poem is soo sweet i bet your cousin loved it very good i give you a 5/5 kasia

I can also relate to this. Im really close to one of my cousins. my poem "because your my best friend" is about her. Although i really enjoyed this poem i think it could have been longer but considering it was for a comp it may have had a limit.
xx
Taegan Emily

Aww, thats so pretty.
i love it!