This is really great, I really impressed with your word picking and also the flow is running well. Brilliantly written, 5/5 from my heart!!

I can rele relate i like it!! great job!

So far this is my fav poem from u. the flow and words were perfect through the whole poem..never once did i seem it had a downfall..
the way u express urself from good to bad feelings was very unusall.but i loved it

Very niice poem!!! i liiked it alot
keep up the great work!
5/5

<3 i love you silly

Aw, this is such a nice poem. I really loved it. The flow and the word usage were just perfect. Great job. 5/5

*Cindy*

Noticed a spelling error on the line;

Hopeing your in a place worse then Hell.

part from that, was a good read, though the flow was a little off at parts

I like your use of words. this poem was a great one. i just wonder who that person was that you wanted away at last. its a beautifully written poem and im glad that persons gone if you really didn't like them. great read. write more please!! 5/5 !props!

Really Great Job 5/5

I noticed you wrote a lot of love and explicit poetry. I wanted to stay away from that sort of thing for a while, so I decided to read this one. I liked it. It's a very different feel from your other poetry. It sort of explains why you wrote the other poems, and I can understand.

Wow this is another amazing poem. It was really well written and the flow was great. You can tell a lot of emotion was put into this poem. You did a great job on this poem and I really enjoyed reading it. You really got your point across. Nice job again. 5/5 =)